Where are you when I wake up?

actually this should red 'Where are you when I wake up in the morning?' but whatever.

Ok...I know this looks like VERY BL style and quite gay, but yah whatever. I like it nevertheless, a 2 hour drawing/doodle/whatever done by me in a fit of insanity when I should have hit the sack by rights. I went to sleep like 7am and woke up only a few hours later, barely getting a wink, cuz I was too obsessed with finishing a halloween picture. which I messed up anyways. This almost looks like a prelude to some shonen-ai doujinshi or something. -_-'

Btw, I just realised it looks like crap. Most of my stuff looks like crap, that is in my bro's computer screen. The I adjusted the brightness and contrast of the screen and it was alright. The background couldn't be seen at all on my bro's comp just this white blank space mostly. It's supposed to be reddish with white drooping strands in it. Tell me what you guys see and if I'm correct or that I have to do something. What are the brightness on your computers? is there a fix setting that one should use when doing drawings?